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Angel

She stands in the doorway, the light from the hall floating in, as if it were a gift. Her hair is perfect, not in a perfect way, but in a flawed, human way. Slowly she smiles, and the light seems to pulse, to grow with her radiance. Her skin, so pale, becomes clear to the eye, and seems so delicate that it would crack if a tear fell upon it.

She approaches, her fluid grace sends a shiver down his spine. Slowly, she raises her eyes from the foot of the bed to his eyes, and he begins to weep. So long has he waited for this sight, a sight remembered from so long ago. She reaches out and cradles his head in her arms, and her wings wrap around him.

Finally they are as one again, but this time nothing will separate them; not the frailty of one human body, nor the stubbornness of another that clung to life through so many years of pain and solitude. They were together again, and that would be all they would know.
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Another from high school.

I'm not as happy with this one, but it is one of the few I kept, and my wife likes it.

You can see that I've tried fit too much in, and I get a bit "clever" with the stuff about perfection in the first paragraph.

It's not exactly an original concept either, and I tried to make it not seem to obvious (other than the title) on what was going on until the last paragraph.

Originally, I was unsure how to frame the relationship - father daughter or some such would have been ok, but not as poignant with the ageing of the surviving character.

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